Friday, February 5, 2010

Elusive Enticer

Slumber the elusive enticer
Beckons me like a bottle of wine
When towards it i wander
Escapes me more times than nine

In the subtle night i ponder
About matters gory and divine
Letting every feeble thought wander
Into the densest crevice and ravine

Wrought with the melody of glee
Of past laurels and memory
Entwined with grief and melancholy
Turning into a potpourri!

Emotions find a convenient vent
Bringing to surface the severest dent
From loss of love and pride so hurt
The tears flow freely, almost spurt

Slumber ye elusive enticer
Engulf me within your steadfast grasp
Lest i give in to the darkness
And in eternal anguish bask.

8 comments:

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  2. Niceeeeeeee!! :)
    Cheer Up Gal! write more happy stuffy!

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  3. hey calvin, thanks, i write what flows, i'm not in an unhappy mood, it's just that my writing is that way, who's calvin by the way?

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  4. Not enough people rhyme anymore. Bravo!

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  5. thanks Gerry , i guess rhyming shouldn't be the only criteria of judgement

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  6. Very imaginative ... scary sleep, the troubled doze.

    Excellent ... and yes there are even rhymes, wow.

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